Current Feedback-

We have now received feedback on all of the components that make up our opening title sequence so that we have the chance to try and make them better- which I a great idea as it means that everything can be made better to get the best possible grade. We have been marked separately by our teachers on both the evaluation and our blogs as well as the opening title sequence but for this we all achieved a mark that was the same as the finished product was supposed to be worked on proportionally for all member in the group.

BLOG- 17/20

This mark is reflective of my blog and I s a good mark but, I would like to rye and pick up a couple marks on my blog to ensure that the best possible grade that I can achieve is given. When we got the mark for our blogs we was not provided with any feedback but, I think that my blog just needs more degree of interactivity therefore, to ensure that this happens I plan to try and make more Prezi documents, include more visuals in previous post and also just make sure that literary errors are not evident.

OPENING TITLE SEQUENCE- 37/60

I was not content with this mark but, I will definitely try and make this mark increase as it is not the best mark and does not reflect the other components of the coursework. The ways of making the opening title sequence better was by just getter cleaner filming as well as some better acting which is understandable. I do think that possibly transitions could be made better and I could look at ensuing this so that the continuity is secured.

We also need to ensure that in the outcome there is an injection of comedy as so far it is too serious. We also have two more things to work on and it is the fight scene because the fight scene was far too late and did not reflect the fighting very well that would be evident in the film. Also to do more slapstick narrative anecdote within like hiding behind almost or even getting an image of a funny face on the phone.

EVALUATION- 16/20

The evaluation mark came back very well without any corrections and this has meant that if worse comes to worst a B would just be secured- although, I want to push for an A. To improve this component of the coursework I need to ensure that in the farming there is only a close-up of me. I also need to make sure that instead of mentioning Eddie Murphy as representation I talk about me. I also need to ensure that I re-write some parts making sure that my writing is not too flowery as this can mean that I become misunderstood.

Overall- 70/100