Blog FEEDBACK

Today, was the day in which we received some needed blog feedback which I think that generally as a class is the vital way of improving something to make it better? To begin with Shaun, our teacher said some comments about our blogs without giving the grades as, they are accessible on a Macintosh within our time and facilities.

We then all went to the Macs and unfortunately, it had not been posted so we found Shaun whom printed out the document on a printer. After this slight narrative, I got my feedback which overall was pleasing. The grade was judged as A grade which is the highest grade in AS so to an extent I knew that there was no major changes that my blog needed to endure.

Most of the suggestions for improvements were completed at the weekend; this being the uploaded of phis from a shooting of our opening title sequence on January the 22^nd which have already been placed on my blog at the weekend and the other essential and vital post which needed to be put on my blog was the re-shot scenes from the storyboard which have all been met but, I will ask Shaun to check that the posts I am talking of meet the criteria.

The essential piece of information in which Shaun advised me about was the idea that I write a lot in the form of long documents making it rather ‘’text heavy’’ he has noticed that I have tried to differ from just this innovative by doing journal videos as well as power points and Prezi slide shows but, making the blog in a way more interactive with the consumer would only help to improve but, as he said it is a suggestion.

From the feedback which I have completed at the weekend I just plan to go through my blog possibly adding screen shots as well as some possible photos and clip which will only in a way incise the audience and make my blog far more interesting to use. Other than this I just plan to carry on doing what I am currently doing to try and maintain a high grade.

Ms Whittaker - Feedback

Leanne’s Feedback

The feedback that Leanne gave me was really crucial and I feel that the mistakes I made can be corrected easily. As for the literacy mistakes made, I do feel that they could have been prevented. I have changed these quickly by getting all posts one by one and putting them onto word for spell checking so, that I knew for definite the minor literacy errors that were made could be corrected.

The other clear mistakes or rather improvements that could be made to my work was screenshots on all long analysis as, they become hard to flow and the screenshots would ensure that there was clear reference to the point that your making. I will ensure that going through the videos and screen shooting for evidence that relates point specifically will make this.

I need to also have the output on some of the clips to be again put onto YouTube as, some don’t show up and have ‘’408 request’’.to insure that I can change this I will make sure that they are once again put onto the blog without crashing.