Leanne’s Feedback
The feedback that Leanne gave me was really crucial and I
feel that the mistakes I made can be corrected easily. As for the literacy
mistakes made, I do feel that they could have been prevented. I have changed
these quickly by getting all posts one by one and putting them onto word for
spell checking so, that I knew for definite the minor literacy errors that were
made could be corrected.
The other clear mistakes or rather improvements that could
be made to my work was screenshots on all long analysis as, they become hard to
flow and the screenshots would ensure that there was clear reference to the
point that your making. I will ensure that going through the videos and screen
shooting for evidence that relates point specifically will make this.
I need to also have the output on some of the clips to be
again put onto YouTube as, some don’t show up and have ‘’408 request’’.to
insure that I can change this I will make sure that they are once again put onto
the blog without crashing.
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