When, it got to the stage that our group was about to show, Miss Whittaker went onto YouTube as, our opening titles was already put onto the video stream and then everyone watched. After, everyone watched it was time to start receiving feedback from selected candidates to speak per each group. Personally, feedback is hard to take but, is justifiable when it will help to improve our finished product.
The main criticism was the fact that people couldn’t focus
upon the editing as there were too many overlapping images that the editing
made people miss certain shots thus getting confused. Our teacher commented on
this and said that this needs to improve in order to give an insight into the
narrative and the thematic of the film which I completely agree because when
looking back it is slightly hard to keep focus on one thing without another
distracting the first frame, which can be rectified after school. I do plan to
come back after school within the next week to make some changes to this with
hopefully my group but, the date is yet to be scheduled.
In terms of my positions within the opening title sequence,
they could have been better performed by me in one of the roles. Personally, feel
that the continuity of the sequence needs re-thinking as, if it is hard to
understand then this box is not being as it were ticked spa I plan to make some
shots smaller and less overlap of frames. But, I am fairly happy with my performance
with the titles as people complemented the way that the titles worked well with
the music, transitions and the general look of them.
The mistakes will be rectified with the upcoming week for
timing purposes as we do need to start thinking ahead for the exam.
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