Summary of new edit

Small summary of what I think of the new edit compared to the other;

Above is the new edit which has beeen uploaded to YouTube.

Personally I am rather happy with  the way that our new opening tile sequence looks as it more engaging for the audience and is to an extent easier to follow. I still think the editing of overlapping footage could have possibly been less applied but, that is no means a critical comment because it does set up enigmas of the narrative and gives transition from frame to fame. So, completely losing it would have been less beneficial then applying it less frequently. If there is time I would like to possibly ask people to watch it and try and get some feedback of what they think our opening tile sequence is about that way if there is a major problem it will need to be re-thought. But, obviously as the deadline has practically gone it would be in the groups best interest that small changes were rectified quickly. 

Taking into account people's thoughts would be a good idea as the public are the way revenue is made therefore, they would be the main reliance for support for the film to do well.